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January 27th, 2007, 1:00 pm

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skyfarer, January 13th, 2007, 1:27 pm

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Zenon has man-boobs. 8D

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Guest, January 27th, 2007, 1:04 pm |

" Zenon has man-boobs. 8D " WTH? xD lol. But I love Zenon's reaction/attitude toward Thanos. Very Happy-ish :D

Mecari, January 27th, 2007, 1:33 pm |

Yaaaay for man boobs!!!!

Those are some flat manboobies. @____@;;

Awwwwww. But I love Zen!! He's too cute. I love his thoughts!!! "This kid... is a moron." I just CRACKED UP SO HARD. Hahaha. I love the little details and things like that that you put into Silvarta~!! <3!! Lol, now Zen's going to push Thanos into oblivion. He seems so nice in the last frame, though. Awwww. I want to huggle him~

Oh yeah, because you know, after Thanos sees your dazzling smile,Zen, he's just going to skip away, off the edge of a huge seemingly-bottomless chasm and leave his unconscious best friend with you to do with as you please. After all, maybe you can charm her back to consciousness with your smile!! Hey, if I were Thanos I'd buy it. XD <- ((is an idiot...))

Yaaaay! Poor Rethia's finally being acknowledged!!!

Wow! Zen's really observant. He picked up on her name already. ((unless he already knew... O-o;;)) He's just so endearing to me~

<3 Zen

Croon, January 27th, 2007, 1:50 pm |

MOOOOOOOOOOBS!!!
x3
<33333333
xD

Ice Age Mammoth, January 27th, 2007, 2:03 pm |

hes fin yet has man boobs, to me the only explation is that he has the rare boob diorder that causes men boobs to 'milk' and yes this is a real disorder.
LOL

YungiBear, January 27th, 2007, 3:21 pm |

** Thanos fangirl nowkthx **

x3

I love how Blizzy does clothing folds. Makes Zen have manboobies. XD

But yeah, lovelovelovelove. ** squishle **

myst, January 27th, 2007, 4:28 pm |

Whee there are doctors in hell? =D Awsome~

catqueen13, January 27th, 2007, 6:12 pm |

Poor Thanos! He must have tuberculosis!

And Im not sure if Zenon is good or bad yet... I don't know who's who anymore! I'm so confuzzled! ;-;

Silent (Guest), January 27th, 2007, 8:37 pm |

Your characters are so complex!!! I <3 it! Zenon can be so inwardly sincere yet a little insensitive. I don't know whether to hate him or like him. (Probably like because his duality complex intrigues me ^_^;;) You're getting really great at the dark manga background things, btw. It adds a nice touch in emphasizing the seriousness of Thanos's (illness?).

Bit Cloudu (Guest), January 28th, 2007, 2:14 pm |

I was hooked in by the beautiful art of your banner on the Smackjeeves main page. (You draw and color quite well!) But I have to say that I'm a little confused, (and slightly dissappointed) as to the plot of this fic. You seem to variate between comedy and seriousness, which doesn't quite work at times. The art as well is inconsistant. You never seem to stay with one style for longer than a page or so. And the overall story, while having potential, just seems fragmented and random. the first 7 pages of this comic were stunning in their inking and composition, but when I got to pg 8, I had to check to see if I was still in the right manga, the style was so...different, so simplified. (and not in a good way. It just seems like you got tired of drawing and shading, so you just threw something together just so you could say you had an update.) I see in your FAQ that you comment on the fact that you are lazy, which explained some stuff. I know that amidst the praises and 'ZOMG!'s this will probably come as a shock, but it's just a friendly critic, nothing more. Not meant to offend. I do not have an account with smackjeeves, hence the reason I signed on as a guest, and I saw no reason to sign up simply to leave a comment.

skyfarer, January 28th, 2007, 3:19 pm |

Bit Cloudu - Thank you for your comment. It is refreshing to have a crit once in a while (although too much would discourage me from drawing). :)

I wrote the beginning of the script as a fourteen-year-old, and this manga was originally intended to be purely comedy. As I grew older, I realized I didn't like forcing humor out of myself. Thus, I attempted an actual storyline, which came together in bouts of inspiration. True, I do need to improve in clarity. I just don't know how. ^^;

Much of chapters 1 and 2 were also sketched at that time, which may explain the fluctuations in style; I adhered to the original outlines when I inked. I plan to redo these pages sometime in the future.

Please understand that this is a sixteen-year-old drawing a highly time-consuming manga. I have at least eight hours of homework a night; I don't spend as much time on this manga as I would like. However, I will take your words to heart and endeavor to improve. :)

Thank you again.

gothickitty, January 29th, 2007, 3:05 am |

omg what does this mean?does this mean hes not evil?plz answer pretty plz?

tiirikka, January 29th, 2007, 7:26 am |

ooh... You have really trapped my intrest. T_T I'm starting to do online comic too, I hope it would be even half as good as yours, but man, I can't draw. ._. *fears behalf of the Mewtant story* oh well, I have to continue drawing the prologue. ^^' Maybe I Learn thing or two while drawing. But thanks from every single pages of Silvarta. <3 *happy* Just waiting for update, no rush! :D

dracs_bow-cos, January 29th, 2007, 9:19 am |

dude he's a freak 0_0......but in a good way

Stefferz, January 29th, 2007, 7:49 pm |

Aww, Zen's sooo cut sometimes ^-^

But wait... where is his ponytail? I swear he changed his sword back!

-Ish confuzzeld and pays too much detail to the small things-

samrin, January 30th, 2007, 4:23 pm |

O_O This... is a great comic D:
I envyyyyyyyy!
Zenon is teh <3
Another reason is cause his name starts with a "Z" XD
I have a story in the making with the main character with a "Z" name too lol xP

BUT ANYWAY. This is great!
Keep it up I can't wait to see more! =D

+fave most definitely!

C³ (Guest), January 30th, 2007, 9:56 pm |

@myst Doctor's in hell? That's all good then. We should all jump into the bottomless chasm of d00m :)

I'm very weirded out by how Zenon suddenly looks so cute-little-kid in that last panel XD;; It's kinda creepy.

Gunhld-chan (Guest), January 31st, 2007, 12:41 pm |

Aaah he looks so handsome when he says : "we have doctors down there.."
I really liket this page ^_^

DancingChaos (Guest), January 31st, 2007, 8:49 pm |

Whee!! I love this comic!!! You're a very talented artist :)

D': (Guest), February 2nd, 2007, 6:07 pm |

UPDATE DX! I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVERRR.
Heh, no rush. I understand :3 -cries-
I LOVE YOU D: xD

shany, February 3rd, 2007, 7:09 am |

Aww... poor Thanos... and what happened to Lyris? I lost track... >_< I think she's a really cute character. <333 But my fave guy character is Zenon. He's freakin' sexy. XDDDD

I wanna read moreeee!!! *w*

NarutoOndo, May 13th, 2007, 1:07 pm |

yay!

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