skyfarer, 23 May 2006 05:19 pm

Enter Rosie, the most blatently obvious Mary Sue in this manga. :P

Renmazuo, 23 May 2006 07:24 pm |

°A° You know, i remember seeing a character like her(not the same, just...long hair, really feminine clothes...) and she acted really Mary Sue-ish just...she would snap out occasionally destroying everything in her classroom and then she would take out a carpenter outfit and fix everything shortly after O_O

Scary.

Awesome page like usual, your inking is smooth and really clean, and the balance between light and dark in every page is perfect as well.

My only critique would be that Rosie's hand is a bit too big(if you compare it to her face) but that is me just being extremely picky T_T;;

*throws off a cliff because she doesn't know how to give useful comments*

xD That's awesome! Rosie will be a typical Mary-Sue type who has her own quirks. *nodnod* :)

I actually thought so too. Hand should cover from chin to a little above eyebrows.. *mumblemumble* I guess I'll fix it. *fixes* XD

shadows I really love how you do you shadowing, I really need help with that. *pout* I can never get my shadows right. Your characters are so cute and lovable, I'm instantly addicted.

looks ok.

That tie-guy is cu~te! *w* I'll rob him from you and put below my bed!! :P

Yay XD Lolz...You're really coming along with this comic. Awesome job, blizz. ^_^ Update again soon.

~Silent

*_* *sparkle* *sparkle*
such a cute manga + funny!!! I love it!!! definitely fav!

Your shading really makes this comic comic alive. My most common complaint with manga comics is that chracters, and especially their faces, often look flat. You do a wonderful job of dimensionalizing your characters. I haven't read the comic, but I can definately say the art is lovely.

Awee This manga is so beatiful!! I think I'm stuck to your style now...err in a way...nvm ^^;;

She's so cute toooo!!! >_<!!